1. Directions
Each passage in this section is accompanied by a number of questions. For some questions, you will consider how the passage might be revised to improve the expression of ideas. For other questions, you will consider how the passage might be edited to correct errors in sentence structure, usage, or punctuation. A passage or a question may be accompanied by one or more graphics (such as a table or graph) that you will consider as you make revising and editing decisions.
Some questions will direct you to an underlined portion of a passage. Other questions will direct you to a location in a passage or ask you to think about the passage as a whole.
A pair of brackets containing an uppercase Q and a number — for example, [Q1] — indicates that an associated question refers to that location in the passage or to the following underlined portion of the passage. The number in brackets is the number of the associated question. The bracketed element is hyperlinked to the associated question, and the question heading is hyperlinked back to the related location or portion of the passage.
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After reading each passage, choose the answer to each question that most effectively improves the quality of writing in the passage or that makes the passage conform to the conventions of standard written English. Many questions include a “NO CHANGE” option. Choose that option if you think the best choice is to leave the relevant portion of the passage as it is.
In questions that ask you to consider potential revisions, the list of answer choices is followed by a presentation of each revision in context. A set of revisions in context is surrounded by “Begin skippable content” and “End skippable content” labels formatted as level6 headings. If a question includes a “NO CHANGE” option, that option in the skippable content will present the relevant context of the passage in its original form with the original underlined text. For the following options, the same context will be repeated with the underlined portion replaced by each revision to be considered.
Punctuation is essential to some questions in this test, so we suggest that you either activate the punctuationreading function of your software or utilize the characterbycharacter capabilities.
Questions 1 through 11 are based on the following passage and supplementary material.
Compost: Don’t Waste This Waste
Over the past generation, people in many parts of the United States have become accustomed to dividing their household waste products into different categories for recycling. [Q1] Regardless, paper may go in one container, glass and aluminum in another, regular garbage in a third. Recently, some U S cities have added a new category: compost, organic matter such as food scraps and yard debris. Like paper or glass recycling, composting demands a certain amount of effort from the public in order to be successful. But the inconveniences of composting are far outweighed by its benefits.
Most people think of banana peels, eggshells, and dead leaves as “waste,” but compost is actually a valuable resource with multiple practical uses. When utilized as a garden fertilizer, compost provides nutrients to soil and improves plant growth while deterring or killing pests and preventing some plant diseases. It also enhances soil texture, encouraging healthy roots and minimizing or [Q2] annihilating the need for chemical fertilizers. Better than soil at holding moisture, compost minimizes water waste and storm runoff, [Q3] it increases savings on watering costs, and helps reduce erosion on embankments near bodies of water. In large [Q4] quantities, which one would expect to see when it is collected for an entire municipality), compost can be converted into a natural gas that can be used as fuel for transportation or heating and cooling systems.
In spite of all compost’s potential uses, however, most of this socalled waste is wasted. According to the Environmental Protection Agency (E P A), over [Q5] 13 million tons of metal ended up in U S landfills in 2009, along with over 13 million tons of yard debris. Remarkably, [Q6] less glass was discarded in landfills in that year than any other substance, including plastics or paper. Even [Q7] worse, then the squandering of this useful resource is the fact that compost in landfills cannot break down due to the lack of necessary air and moisture. As a result, organic material that is sent to landfills [Q8] contribute to the release of methane, a very [Q9] potent greenhouse gas.
Note: The following figure supplements this passage. The passage continues after the figure.
Adapted from Food Waste Disposal. ©n.d. by Food Waste Disposal, L L C.
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The figure presents a bar graph titled “E P A Estimates of Municipal Solid Waste Discarded in U S Landfills in 2009.” The horizontal axis is labeled “Type of waste” and contains 10 vertical bars representing the following 10 categories, from left to right: “food waste,” “plastics,” “paper,” “metals,” “wood,” “yard waste,” “textiles,” “glass,” “other,” and “rubber and leather.” The vertical axis is labeled “Amount of waste, in millions of tons,” and the numbers 0 through 35, in increments of 5, are indicated. The approximated data represented by each of the 10 bars are as follows.
Food waste, 33 million tons.
Plastics, 28 million tons.
Paper, 26 million tons.
Metals, 14 million tons.
Wood, 14 million tons.
Yard waste, 13.5 million tons.
Textiles, 11 million tons.
Glass, 9 million tons.
Other, 7 million tons.
Rubber and leather, 6 million tons.
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[Q10] While composting can sometimes lead to accidental pollution through the release of methane gas, cities such as San Francisco and Seattle have instituted mandatory composting laws requiring individuals and businesses to use separate bins for compostable waste. This strict approach may not work everywhere. However, given the clear benefits of composting and the environmental costs of not composting, all municipalities should encourage their residents either to create their own compost piles for use in backyard gardens [Q11] or to dispose of compostable materials in bins for collection.
Question 1.
Answer choices in context:
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A. Over the past generation, people in many parts of the United States have become accustomed to dividing their household waste products into different categories for recycling. Regardless, paper may go in one container, glass and aluminum in another, regular garbage in a third.
B. Over the past generation, people in many parts of the United States have become accustomed to dividing their household waste products into different categories for recycling. However, paper may go in one container, glass and aluminum in another, regular garbage in a third.
C. Over the past generation, people in many parts of the United States have become accustomed to dividing their household waste products into different categories for recycling. Furthermore, paper may go in one container, glass and aluminum in another, regular garbage in a third.
D. Over the past generation, people in many parts of the United States have become accustomed to dividing their household waste products into different categories for recycling. For example, paper may go in one container, glass and aluminum in another, regular garbage in a third.
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